Talk:Super Soldiers/@comment-25453085-20150226215908

to be honest I don't think I am capable of writing anything like a book or sceenplay, and am happyly updating these articles for the moment.

As far as improving your story, what do you think needs improving? I am hesitant to jump in and make changes as my "vision" may be different to yours. Like I have said, it is your story, do your research and try to make it as believable and scientifically accurate as possible and you will find it will fall into place. I also base a lot of my writing on RPG's (Shadow Run particularly) and futurists wiki's

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shadowrun

http://www.futuretimeline.net/index.htm

They give me a lot of ideas.