User talk:Chaerani

Answer to Question Regarding Matriarchy
As you know, your page has been combined with a similar article to form Scenario: Matriarchy. The article now has an orange tag saying that the article is disputed. Here are the steps you may want to consider to resolve the issue:


 * 1) First, note that the primary concern is not the first part (which I assume is yours) but much of the remainder. User:RyanVG went into great detail for his matriarchy scenario, and his writing ability is not particularly deserving of applause. This is the greatest reason why the article is tagged.
 * 2) In the top part, the main problem I notice is imperfect grammar. Some words should have "the" or "a" preceeding them, or should be made plural, to improve coherence. I suggest that whenever you write an article, that you proofread to find such problems. That should help.
 * 3) You provide plenty of unsupported points of divergence for your scenario, but do not analyze them in depth. The more explanation of why your scenario is likely, the more we will accept it. For this issue, I strongly advise that you do more guesswork and analytical thinking, expand on the issue, and search on the web for what experts may have to say on this topic.
 * 4) If you're up to it, go ahead--revise RyanVG's portion of the article. Thanks!
 * 5) And of course, ENJOY!!!

--Yunzhong Hou 22:17, 1 October 2006 (UTC)