Talk:The Ongoing Collapse of China (Incoming Disorder)/@comment-28816571-20190719024133

Minor nitpicks:

Some criticism:
 * The 1931 Yellow River Floods is conflated with the 1938 Yellow River Floods in this statement; "a Nationalist tactic to prevent IJA advance", which applies only to the latter, which is admittedly, more well known. (As reference, the Second Sino-Japanese War began in 1936...)

As Aiothai noted, its is more of an essay as opposed to an encyclopedic article, and I would appreciate it if it was altered to be more reflective of one. Beyond that however, with my cursory knowledge, there appears to be little else that I have any substantial qualms about so far, and the article itself is of a higher quality than most on the wiki.
 * Technology did develop in Ancient China, particularly in the field of warfare, though certain technologies, including the famous earthquake detection device, were indeed mishandled and lost in the annals of history, due to a lack of any significant attachment to innovation. Living standards also may have fluctuated throughout China's history.