Talk:The Attempted Assassination of Joe Biden (Jake's World)/@comment-46135007-20201023111105/@comment-46351040-20201023225248

Hey, this is the first time I've seen this article. My only suggestion is reworking it to be more readable, I had trouble understanding some parts with the wording, especially the comment by George Bush. That, and I don't think Biden (or anyone, for that) would just say, "As you may know, I was almost shot."